I need Help

Please I need you/ll correct this letter:

Dear Mr. XXX and Mr. XXX:

Thank you very much for still choosing the Hotel XXX for lodge your workers.

Next month begins middle season so we put in your knowledge our new rates from April to June 2010 (June included) , these are:

 Single room: X €
 Double room: X €

Taxes included.

Also we included too a personal invitation for Mr Ferguson and Mr Gilbert for a weekend in our rural apartments “XXX”.

Please contact us again if we can help in any way

Yours sincerely

XXX

Asked by alexkry - 19:03 13/03/10
Lives in Spain. Learns: English (Beginner)

2 Answers

In English the verb and subject are not inverted in regular speech. You don't need to use too if you are using also because they mean the same thing.

Answered by BellaMargarita - 22:03 13/03/10
Lives in United States. Learns: Spanish (Intermediate)

Next month,the middle season begins so we are letting you know about our new rates from April to June 2010 (June included) , these are

We have also included a personal invitation for Mr Ferguson and Mr Gilbert for a weekend in our rural apartments “XXX

Answered by BellaMargarita - 22:03 13/03/10
Lives in United States. Learns: Spanish (Intermediate)