Someone would be so nice of to correct my formal letter, please??

Dear Ms. Chatham,
Allow me to introduce myself; I am Adela Rueda Fernández, a graduate of veterinary science from Autònoma de Barcelona University, Barcelona, Spain.
I am writing you to inquire if it would be possible for me to realize a stay in your center.
I am interested in an intern imaging diagnostic position. I would like to meet with you in order to benefit from understanding your way of working.
I would like to conduct a stay program such Leonardo da Vinci; therefore I need your consent to include your hospital in the program.
My English is basic but I intend toimprove with stay. I like to work hard and to learn as much as possible.
I believe that it is a good opportunity for me and that I can adapt to new environments.
Finally, I would like to refer my letter and my CV for intern imaging diagnostic application that it will begin in August 2012. Would be a great plesure for me to work in a prestigious institution such as yours.
My goal is to become a imaging diagnostic specialist and your center is right for to learn this specialitzation.
P.D: Attached to this letter you will find, my curriculum viate, my letter of intent and Leonardo program forms for if you want to made part the program.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely;
Adela Rueda Fernández.

 jjiijji  after I have a letter, but first, I will listen your corrections of this email.

 oh, thanks for your corrections!!  it's helpful.

Adela

 Dear Ms. Chatham,:
I introduce myself, I am Adela Rueda Fernández, a graduate in veterinary science from Autònoma de Barcelona University, Barcelona, Spain.
I am writing us for to know if would be possible I realize a stay in your center.
I am interested in intern imaging diagnostic application but before I like that you meet to me and I like to make profit for I knowning you way of working.
I like to realize a saty with movility program such Leonardo da Vinci, it is for this that I need your consest for to include your hospital in the program.
My English is basic but I intent of to improve with stay. I like to work hard and I to learn as much as possible.
I believe that it is an opportunity for I have adaptation in other environment.
Finally, I would like to refer my letter and my CV for intern imaging diagnostic application that it will begin in August 2012. Would be a great plesure for me to work in a prestigious institution such as yours.
My goal is to become a imaging diagnostic specialist and your center is right for to learn this specialitzation.
P.D: Attached to this letter you will find, my curriculum viate, my letter of intent and Leonardo program forms for if you want to made part the program.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely;
Adela Rueda Fernández.

 I can help you.  Just paste the letter anywhere I can see it.  In the meanwhile, I'll correct your request--hopefully that will be of some help as well.

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Hi, I'm Adela and I intent  (intend) to do a movility (mobility?) program from Bristol, United Kingdom: (this colon seems inappropriate--a simple period is best).
I'm equine veterinarian; (Again, a simple period is best here instead of the semicolon) I speak a bit of English but I need a lot of improvement which is why I register posted on this forum for this. My goal is to get a place ("postition" might be a better term instead of "place") as an intern imaging diagnostician, but first, I need to learn a lot more English firstly I should greatly improve. Can you help me, please??
Now, I need that you correct me a email.This email apply for a stay with leonardo program. You can help me by correcting an email that I wrote applying for a stay?(--I don't know what you are trying to say with "stay", so I can't give you the proper word here) wtih the Leonardo Program. Someone can you to Can someone correct this email, please??

Where can I attach it?
buff, (?--I don't know what you mean by the word "buff")You Wish me good luck!!!
 

i can edit it.  try copy pasting it maybe?